Wow, the flow of this was almost impenetrable. The style and metaphors, just simply beautiful. Very, very well written.

lovely flow,great rhythm and you check some of my stuff out sometime?

EEbony.

I rahter enjoyed this poem. The flow and story like rythem intrigued me. Thank you for your comments on mine.

This, like everything else you write, was beautiful.. The metaphors were clearly pointed out; which leads to less confusion.. Or, at least, most of them. Some were left up to the reader. Great wording, it was fantastic! Keep it up! Please!

Lav