I like the rhyming and calling God a woman.. the whole piece is great.. it saying how hes good and bad, but the fact that the bad is good is an unusual perspective

yay... happy stuff... i needed that. thank u.

And there's a rope/Is holding you back... you cant have there's and is

nice poem.. cool metaphor and very hopeful

very sweet... I like the whole spiritual and not religious thing... it's cool... I like it

(4. A thank you)

This is more than slightly inspiring to me, being the less-than-devout Christian I am. Putting this into verse couldn't have been easy. =P I look up to you.

=twitch= I amused. xD

Nicely done! Can't say I can relate, being nowhere near 16 yet, but I can imagine how it feels to be weighed down by all these troubles and responsibilities. xD I like the way the poem gradually moves from being eager and hopeful to more quiet and subdued... But perhaps an elipse(sp? The triple-dot type things) or break would make the change more obvious... Unless the way it is now was deliberate?

In any case, this is a great poem! =D

Wow. I'm always in awe when I read your works because they're always so beautiful, and meaningful, and...deep; but this one took the cake. I think thats the right saying. Congrats on such a beautiful piece.~Nicole~

lol... thts funny i know ppl who would totally agree & some who wouldnt... im kinda medium sized so i dont have a point of veiw

i like this poem... normally the term plain jane has such a negative connotation but i like this because you make it so possitive... great job

I like it. Plain Janes of the world, unite! lolAnd I totally agree with the 16 going on 17 one. so true.

You’re not longer... no

i like this... especially the ending.. tis so true.. great job

hehe, these did make me smile. it's pretty true. but kinda stereotypical. that's ok, because it's poetry. not horrible, but not amazing.

Hey! Thank you for reviewing my one poem, and thank you for putting me on your favorites list! I think that this is a nice poem that you've got going along here, and I like the underlying message between it all, and of course, the rhythm was flawless in my opinion. Don't worry about the lack of reviews, because from what I can tell, you've got talent, and it's good that this is a lighthearted poem. It's a refreshing change from the usually morbid poems that I read, and I would like to thank you for the few moments of enjoyment that this poem gave me.

Heather