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seilann 2005-07-17 ch 3,	abuseIt's funny how some of the best memories can come out of the worst times of a person's life. And I'm so glad she's okay! ahem Yes, my randomness aside, this is a cute story. I really admire Alex for what she did. And I wish I could get a guy like Bran. ^_^ And of course it has a happy ending, because they are the best kind of ending to have. All in all, I still really admire your style and I will definitely continue to read your stuff... if I can ever find time. (My own story is being quite difficult.) But even if I review late, I promise I'll get around to reading your updates! (already thinks she's missing a chap or two of Dark Winds) Saa, bai bai! Ganbatte! ~Chippie
seilann 2005-07-13 ch 2,	abuseLate reviewing again -- sorry. Had no net the last week. -_-;; You are REALLY good at characterization in short spaces! I mean, I take at the least ten chapters from multiple POVs to develope just one of my charies. With the two in this story, you know already what they're all about. (can't phrase creatively -- >.< hope you can get that.) Wah~! I hope she's okay! And sorry for not reviewing lately -- again. ^_^;;
Cold0Fished 2005-07-09 ch 2,	abuseThis chapter was even better than the first. Everything made sense, the way Bran described how he was feeling, and how he cursed them. It all clicked and was really enjoyable to read. I hope you can read some of my stuff and tell me what you think.
seilann 2005-07-06 ch 1,	abuseWell look at that, I'm getting author alerts again! Now I must see if you've updated anything else. But first: Wow. Every writer hopes they can portray something like what this character is doing without making it cheesy and unbelievable. And did you do just that! It's so hard to describe what exactly makes it that good, but I assure you, it is! Okay, that whole review sounded really lame... ^_^;; Hope my author alert doesn't conk out again when you update this. ~Chippie
Cold0Fished 2005-07-05 ch 1,	abuseI like how everything the narrator thought of flowed, how every second was long and drawn out as she (i'm assuming) went in looking for Bran, and then it turned optimistic and became free flowing (I'm moving to Alaska...)as she went to leave knowing he was outside.

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