Reviews for Chocolate Chip Muffins

Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2005-11-24 ch 1,	abuseGorgeous stuff. I loved it. Very true to all types of crushes.
shattered hopes 2005-11-15 ch 1,	abuseHello:) I like this poem that you wrote cause it's short, naive yet direct as by reading it, one will know how the girl in the poem actually is feeling. The ending was sad yet in a a sweet way cause instead of brooding about the day's failure, she cheered herself up with a chocolate chip muffin instead. Love it!
Glowing Aura 2005-07-26 ch 1,	abuseNice, but I dont think this quote goes with it: "If she wants his attention, she can’t be a nun." Doesn't make a whole lot of sense and seems out of place. Other than that, I like the ending of chocolate chip muffins.
pencilchewer 2005-07-13 ch 1,	abuseaww that was cute love the chocolate chip muffins part
Lellida 2005-07-09 ch 1,	abuseWOw, this is too funny! The rhyming was perfect, never awkward. I loved the last lines- so THAT"S where the title is from! Cute cute poem. I love it.