You work with what you've got right? If the canvas doesn't work with you, then don't work with it. You have the power to change it! Keep on writing. I feel that this is the link we have together. We can tell exactly what's going on each other's lives through our poetry. You've inspired me to post up more. Thanks.-Cindy Moon *)

Brill, as usual. Good job! ^_^

-MeeLee

I think Canvas is a good title.

You shouldn't put the whole thing in italics.

I think I already told you...but anyway, I like the style. It flows all the way to the end with hardly a breath in between.