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| Travis C. Eckert 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseIn my midn I get this is standing alone once you move out when your 18 or something like that. Of course thats just my perception, not the actual meaning, though it could be. |
| Landon Stray 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abusehm...interesting...seems a bit complex... or am i thinking too much? hm... |
| Mr. Raven 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abusevery nice and so very true.awesome work. |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-08-17 ch 1, | abuseImmortal in life, living in death Wow, pure genius, really clever words there...this was really nice, loved it...keep it up^_^ |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseVery solitary, a beacon of loneliness yet power. |
| Eyes of Amethyst 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseI found the rhyming and the stanzas inconsistent. Yet despite that I love the depth of this piece and the emotions it portrayed. Keep writing! =) ~Eyes of Amethyst |