haha. y'all, actually, I wrote this, or thought/got the idea of it - while I was in the shower. This certain kind of shampoo mom had bought had a horse and someone on it (as a blackened shadow kind of) riding away in the sunset, and the shampoo brand name was called 'magical mane'...interesting, huh? Hehe, perhaps...

Ouch. I don' know why, but it reminds me of what happened in London today. But then again, nearly everything all day has reminded me of what happened in London today. Okay, I hope all is well with you.

Love the details of this piece, very nice.

I really like it, actually. You have a captivating writing style. Even someone who hated this poem would probably have to finish it once they started haha.

Very powerful poem, I love the contrasts. Great work.