You are a very, very talented writer.

- Pricilla Grey

Okay, so I totally love love love the title of this. Probably one of the best titles I've seen in a long time. I got to the part about counting raisins and all I could think from then on was "Cornflake Girl" by Tori Amos. Call me obsessed with her. "Count the bullets in his brain." - heart that line. This is crazy in a good way. Keep writing! :)

I love this so much. I don't even have anything critical to say because I love that it is cryptic and so unusual. You rule.

A wonderful piece of writing, albeit a bit cryptic. Keep it up!

that was gorgeous, if a bit cryptic.

You are a great writer, PeaceChild, and I'm not exaggerating a bit. Love your work.

Going to work on the image later. I sorta have an idea for it.

~Louie