cute. =]

Liked the clever play with words. You always have a good way to end your poems!

So apparently FictionPress fixed the annoying formatting thing a while back? Cool stuff.

oo, this was really clever! I love the way it seems like you are talking to the reader, and each explanation is unique and lovely. Great job on this one!

fantastic! I loved how it all came together at the end. Absolute rubbish that made me smile :D

it made me smile. it does kinda make sense in a weird sort of way, and i thought it was pretty neat. i like the way you think.

this makes me want to try stream-of-consciousness poetry. last five lines are fantastic.

Wow, that's gotta be one of the most original pieces I've ever read. I like your play on words. Very clever. Bravo! :)

AW! Hahahaha this is SO cute. I love it. Very quirky indeed. I didn't know you were Juliet Squared! I need to keep myself updated on your namechanging. ~Beckie~

hmm tahts a cute interesting poem.. i like it

Lovely train of thought. Sounds delightful and quite light-hearted.

I can imagine a bunch of bearded old men at thing long table trying to decide just what the color "blue" was/is.

ha..lovely

hehe... i love it!