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nomy 2007-12-25 ch 3,	abuseyou have one funny story..first it kinda a normal but then your true calling of story revealed! hahaha..like it alot!^_~
xbloodycuntx 2007-11-05 ch 1,	abuse=o ... ... ...I ** LOVE YOU! tackles and hugs
skunk 2006-12-27 ch 3,	abuseSo, your story was really cute and the little comments from you here and there were actually really funny to read. Normally I hate seeing the stupid like A/N's between the story itself because it just sounds stupid but for some reason yours fit and sounded freaking funny. I really enjoyed the story and I'm just about to jump to any others you have, if you do. Though if you don't I'll be sad and angry and probably cry myself to sleep or something. :]
magalina 2006-12-10 ch 2,	abuseoh, NO! Why is this complete! :_: I had fun reading it! James is the best! And I loved the sex scene, really great!! XD
BreathingFlames 2006-07-15 ch 3,	abuselaughs hysterically gasps for breath Oh...god...I think you're perhaps the only person in the world who could pull off a banter-filled sex scene. But you did it. And I love you more than I did, if possible. You are so totally on my favorites list.
NOLONGERPOSTING 2005-10-03 ch 3,	abuseThis was really funny, even if it didn't make any sense at all. Bye!
.love.me.kiss.me.hate.me. 2005-10-02 ch 3,	abuseuhh...the cildren...i dont actually remember anymore. rofl. actually, i think thats funny. where did you misspell youdontknowmynames name? she didnt review the last chapter for my story and CHADS FEELING PRETTY LONELY. dang. i wish she read review boxes. rofl. anyway, this chapter was soo funny ^_^ made me forget that todays sunday and i have to do the dreaded and go back to school tomorrow. SOME JOBS ARE ONLY THREE DAYS A WEEK roflnow if only school was...four day weekend
Nolaknowsmyname 2005-10-02 ch 3,	abuseYay! Sugar Rox! lol that sounds like some kinda breakfast cereal, omg! Im so glad you updated this and didnt jus stop cuz i was worried for a min an all. but you DID it! woohoo. Ok, I gots one complaint, jus one, wat in the world is up wit those crazy names? Honeybutt, sugarbum, cherry wafer? Sugar how much sugar did you have before this chapter? lol Anyways welcome back and I forgive u for gettin my name wrong before cuz you're such an awesome writer and you finally updated for me! Yay Sugar! ok, done cuz this is way long an im ranting. laterz
xanthofile 2005-09-28 ch 3,	abuseit was cute, if a bit random. and god, the mental imagery! pokes out eyes and submerges into a vat of undiluted bleach...IT BURNS too funny.
hesfb 2005-09-28 ch 3,	abusei LOVED the first chapter. and was v. v. v. excited for the 2nd one. but as soon as they started having sex it went completely weird and crappy. im sorry. its like they lost all personality and descended into weird fluff bunnies. im not sure if this was your intent but if your not confident enough to write decent sex then really you should skip it all together. and the third chapter sucked.id recommend deleting two and three and either properly writing it (it could be SO SO SO SO good) or simply lengthening one and making it a one-shot.anywho. xoxo.
xxbloody-heartsxx 2005-09-28 ch 3,	abuseHehe, this story makes me smile a lot. 'Ames and Rice are very very cute together, great job on the new chapter. And I have been writing Rett's part, but I'm currently experiencing the worst writer's block ever on everything, so it's coming very slowly. That and the writing portion of my graduation exam is tomorrow. Yipee.
Esquirella 2005-09-28 ch 3,	abuseAwesomely cute!
Queen of the Jazzed 2005-09-12 ch 2,	abuse-dancedancedance-I'm in first block of my schedual right now...And I read this.With the teacher behind me.And I kept on squeaking and she looked at me weird. Needless to say, this is now my favourite story, due to the fact that it helped me get the computer teacher to think I'm weird. I love you, Wally.CAN I CALL YOU WALLY?That'd be effin' amazing. Woah, I think I need to pee. Anyway. I loved it. -heartheartheartheartheartheartheart-Mea.
Keir16 2005-09-04 ch 2,	abuseIS that going to be a one-shot story or not? Because I don't want it to be, but that's what it says in it's desciption. S0o0o...update soon.
.love.me.kiss.me.hate.me. 2005-08-09 ch 2,	abusei know youdontknowmyname i know her im so lucky...oh wait...off topic wayy off topic ^_^ i already said i love this it does bad things to my mind THINK ABOUT THE CHILDREN rofl yeaah another chapter after this think about the children ^_^hehehe im adding you to my favorites list so i'll be gone now

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