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Need 'n' Know 2005-07-06 . chapter 1
A little cry in life won't hurt.

"Told me" is a very nice touch. Not feeling anything... well, that's sad. Not feeling anything means no life. Insane or sane, people feel - pain, physically and emotionally - "oblivious" would not be the word. You know you don't care shows that it's not "oblivious."

Thank goodness we all don't go to Hell because we don't show anything! No, you don't. You're not doing anything, you're not doing any harm, so there's really no reason to GO to Hell... or Heaven, for all it matters.

I'm talking to myself now.

Nice.

Julia.
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