Reviews for A Boy Brushed Red

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wish-my-name-was-akane 2008-04-01 ch 20,	abuseAWESOME story and totally unpredictable! I was kind of hopeing all along that steve and lex would hook up and I was slightly disappointed that it didn't go any further between them but I still love the story!
EdwardDazzlesMe 2007-12-10 ch 17,	abuseNuh-uh. Not cool, man... NOT COOL.
Salt and Vinegar Pringles 2007-10-31 ch 20,	abuseSimply superb. It was an amazing story that sort of gave a little more insight into the male mind :D. FANTASTIC!
MelGrl 2007-07-30 ch 20,	abuseAww, such a cute story! =)
FlameKnight 2007-07-05 ch 20,	abuseLoved it!
just lookin' around 2007-04-23 ch 20, anon.	abusevery well written story apart from some typos, but don't worry there's hardly any =) i really like this because.. its the different kind of best-friends-falling-in-love thing. the theme is cliched but written differently. love it. the characters (well, lex) actually thinks about the future and isn't just swept off her feet with 'love'.. also the ending is open ended therefore we don't really what will happen in Scott's and Lex' future.. the title is unique.. i just really like this story...
SilentRaven81 2007-03-22 ch 18,	abuseoh my gosh...that scene where scott is yelling at the sky in the playground...that was one of the most emotional things i have ever read in my entire life! I honestly almost started crying when I read this chapter... You are an amazing writer!
ANGEL992210 2007-03-09 ch 20,	abuseVERY NICE STORY.
hxc muffin 2007-03-07 ch 20,	abuse=] firstly i love this story
Seannes Dawn 2007-02-15 ch 20,	abuseHORAY! :) I love your style of writing. :) However, there are some parts of this story which are kind of cliche. Such as the cottage house where all the couples get together, it sort of happened in One Tree Hill and other stories. LOL But other than that, I enjoyed reading your story. :) I shall be checking out your other stories now! Toodles~
Quincy06 2007-02-03 ch 1,	abuseWhen I first read the summary to this story I thought it was going to be just like all the other cliches about best friends falling in love, but now I can see that it might just be different. I like your writing style and how different Scott is from so many other leading male characters. He is a deep thinker, something that is rare these days in stories. I am excited to read on! Quincy
Allison Smith 2007-01-13 ch 17,	abuseOH MY. HOW??! NO Steve is supposed to be MINE! lol. just kidding. I love the fact that the story and chapters are titled after an Underoath song. my boyfriend loves them.
wandless 2006-12-16 ch 20,	abuseNice story.
squiggle-line 2006-08-27 ch 1,	abuseWoah. This is different. Way different, in a good way. I like Scott's in-your-face narration and I'm a sucker for the best-friends-turned-lovers story line. For a while, with all the fights and accusations, I wasn't sure how this was going to end. I also like how Lex's feelings for him (and his feelings for her) were not all that apparent in the eariler chapters. I noticed in one of your author's notes that you mentioned that you had a tendency to add too many characters to a story. Let me be the first to 'fess up and say I have the same problem too. Sometimes I even get my own characters confused...I guess I'm telling you this so you'll take this piece of criticsm with a grain of salt: I thought there were too few characters in this story. In a way, I thought Scott's world felt claustrophobic. If he wasn't at his house, he was at Lex's. Or Dex's. And he interacted with very few people. Maybe it's part of Scott's narration, to not mention people that aren't important to him...but the few times that his sisters or his parents are mentioned seem rather random. Overall, a nice read. The lists were hilarious. The writing was smooth. Nice.
Liquid 2006-04-17 ch 20, anon.	abuseDistribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of pineapples. Haha I just saw that at the bottom of the page and it made me laugh. Well I just read your WHOLE story today and it was pretty good. Good job on finishing a story. =)

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