This was a really cute story :) I'm glad the two of them ended up together after all that trouble. Great job :D

Haha, Scott and Lex are adorable. Awesome story :)

Your story was really inspiring! Not many people write about people who mess up, and I really like how you portrayed Scott as an imperfect character without making him seem angsty and pathetic. :D

I envy your awesome writing skills.

AWESOME story and totally unpredictable! I was kind of hopeing all along that steve and lex would hook up and I was slightly disappointed that it didn't go any further between them but I still love the story!

Nuh-uh. Not cool, man... NOT COOL.

Simply superb. It was an amazing story that sort of gave a little more insight into the male mind :D. FANTASTIC!

Aww, such a cute story! =)

Loved it!

very well written story apart from some typos, but don't worry there's hardly any =)
i really like this because.. its the different kind of best-friends-falling-in-love thing. the theme is cliched but written differently. love it.
the characters (well, lex) actually thinks about the future and isn't just swept off her feet with 'love'.. also the ending is open ended therefore we don't really what will happen in Scott's and Lex' future..
the title is unique.. i just really like this story...

oh my gosh...that scene where scott is yelling at the sky in the playground...that was one of the most emotional things i have ever read in my entire life!
I honestly almost started crying when I read this chapter...
You are an amazing writer!

VERY NICE STORY.

=] firstly i love this story

HORAY! :) I love your style of writing. :) However, there are some parts of this story which are kind of cliche. Such as the cottage house where all the couples get together, it sort of happened in One Tree Hill and other stories. LOL But other than that, I enjoyed reading your story. :) I shall be checking out your other stories now! Toodles~

When I first read the summary to this story I thought it was going to be just like all the other cliches about best friends falling in love, but now I can see that it might just be different. I like your writing style and how different Scott is from so many other leading male characters. He is a deep thinker, something that is rare these days in stories. I am excited to read on!
Quincy

OH MY.


HOW??! NO

Steve is supposed to be MINE!

lol. just kidding. I love the fact that the story and chapters are titled after an Underoath song. my boyfriend loves them.