interesting alst two lines... im not really liking them.. it seems kinda preachy.. i think if you got rid of them , but left the title itd be better, but that's just me... I like this poem a lot... its very powerful & beautifully written

wow, this is a really emotional poem. i absolutely love it. really nice. keep up the good work!

This is an amazing poem. This is so beautiful and emotional and raw...i like the very ending line "you can't have a beginning without having an end. "