Sad, I hope your friend feels better. Ya done a wonderful job putting this together. Keep up the great work.

I hope your friend feels better...Anyway I liked your poem and your on both of lists!

very powerful. fantastic job. i hope your friend is feeling better.

SP

Yeah...I know...Depression sucks! Anyways...I loved this poem.

I didn't like it much as a poem but I can relate to what it's saying. That is exactly how I feel all the time. Good job and thanks for reveiwing my crappy poem :)

nice poem, you capture the feeling well. However... "steer" is like... cattle and cows... "stare" is the word you are looking for.

Very powerful images here. So full of emotion and the feeling of relentless dread. :D

I like :D