Hey long time no talk ^^ How has everything been going? Dude, I didn't know you were a senior! Me too xD This year is gonna be tough. Like seriously, who said senior year was the easiest year?

Anyways, seems like your style changed a bit. You're maturing in your writing! =D This was good... I agreed with your other reviewer. You could definitely relate some of the lines to the things in current events. Of course, it's all a matter of interpretation.

PS: Can you really smell sand? @_@

This was pretty good. It could almost be read as a critique on the social aspects of politics (I think that made sense.)