aw...that was the cutest thing I have ever read yet sad ...I wish it were longer though :( ..oh well it was a great read !!I wanna read a lot more of your stories!so please make as many as you can hahahah!!

That was wonderful.It did get a bit confusing, and I wish you would describe what they were doing at the end, instead of just doing dialouge.

Extremely well done, An easy flow and fun to read good job. And well done on the summary