 Lucy_anderson 2005-07-10 . chapter 1 its really nice, kinda makes u see it almost. if u want me 2 have helping critasisem or what ever that is-i kno i spelled it wrong, im sorry-maybe it should ryme... but i like it when it doesn't ryme cuz i dunno, makes it less confusing, cuz i always get confused when things ryme cuz they use complicated words i have no clue wut they mean, and it gets annoyin. i REALLY liked the poem-its really kl-i kno i could never do something like that :) |