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| Spootasia Tomoe 2006-01-02 ch 1, | very interesting. again, you have a way with imagery. i like it! kudos |
| Uriah Hamilton 2005-12-07 ch 1, | Sweet, this poem is really cool! |
| Toadster 2005-10-01 ch 1, | ditto your other poem. you capture the seizure completely. |
| Infinity Plus One 2005-08-10 ch 1, | That really does sound like ECT.Good poem, very interesting, well done. |
| aries-diva-JC 2005-08-09 ch 1, | really cool... i love the words u used... i admit it kinda confuses me, but dats cool... my guess is its about life kinda and how its crazy and fast paced and kinda dangerous and stuff... i think the 'wires exposed' part in the beginning is about how u kinda show ur heart to ppl and whats inside of u and stuff... but w/e, i mite b completely wrong... neway, great job, keep up d good work... |
| Illegal Copyright Streaker 2005-07-12 ch 1, | I especially like the line "as I writhe and dream at top speed" and the alliteration with the words "spastically shivering." Haven't yet figured out the metaphor though (if any)...Nice work! |
| Pawnik 2005-07-07 ch 1, | Oh, good though watch your use of some language. |