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Reviews For: I Sleep Like Electric Currents

Spootasia Tomoe
2006-01-02
ch 1,
very interesting. again, you have a way with imagery. i like it! kudos
Uriah Hamilton
2005-12-07
ch 1,
Sweet, this poem is really cool!
Toadster
2005-10-01
ch 1,
ditto your other poem. you capture the seizure completely.
Infinity Plus One
2005-08-10
ch 1,
That really does sound like ECT.Good poem, very interesting, well done.
aries-diva-JC
2005-08-09
ch 1,
really cool... i love the words u used... i admit it kinda confuses me, but dats cool... my guess is its about life kinda and how its crazy and fast paced and kinda dangerous and stuff... i think the 'wires exposed' part in the beginning is about how u kinda show ur heart to ppl and whats inside of u and stuff... but w/e, i mite b completely wrong... neway, great job, keep up d good work...
Illegal Copyright Streaker
2005-07-12
ch 1,
I especially like the line "as I writhe and dream at top speed" and the alliteration with the words "spastically shivering." Haven't yet figured out the metaphor though (if any)...Nice work!
Pawnik
2005-07-07
ch 1,
Oh, good though watch your use of some language.
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