Reviews for From Me to You - FictionPress.com

by His blood 2005-07-15 ch 1,	wow, this was great. powerful and beautifully written. the repetition of 'from me to you' really worked well in this and helped to get the point across very nicely. my favorite lines would have to be: //a broken heart, one you have broken/served on a platter, from me to you// but i loved all of this. excellent job, please keep writing.
la-mocha 2005-07-07 ch 1,	very nice wording
lackluster 2005-07-07 ch 1,	oh wow! this is practiaclly drowning in emotion! i like that. it doesn't seem to flow as easily, but i love the message behind it, and especially the beginning! ~tuesday
breezy nostrils 2005-07-07 ch 1,	Full of raw emotion...you have really conveyed it with your word choice. Nice work! Keep going!