Reviews for Time and Aging - FictionPress.com

laughter at the funeral 2005-07-07 ch 1,	very good points...i love that time robs us of happiness...and the rhyme at the between the last 3 lines is a good way of ending it..good job...oh and pls, if you have the time, pls do review some of my poems...thanks... truly yours...
Eyes of Amethyst 2005-07-07 ch 1,	So very true; I agree with this poem. Love the concept, but I found the rhyming just a wee bit forced. But it's fine! Keep it up! =) ~Eyes of Amethyst
lackluster 2005-07-07 ch 1,	the last line made me smile, just cause its so true...i love how this flows so easily and it has the right message behind it. great work! ~tuesday
Lowell Boston 2005-07-07 ch 1,	Well written, dark, but well written. Not sure if you want to use the centered, singel line stanza format, but your rhythm scheme is great and powerful. Don't agree with you on all things though. Not all marriages end in divorce(I'll be celebrating my 10th anniversary this october 14th). However, we do become more insane as we age. That's the best part. Thanks for posting. Lowel