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| Moondog Dozier 2006-08-13 ch 1,   | Very well written. Sonnets baffle me, as I can't write one to save my life, so I applaud this, because it has true emotion and relatable visuals, while staying true to the form. Good work. |
| Teperehmi 2006-08-08 ch 1, | That was really great! The imagery was wonderful. I especially love the couplet. Nice work. |
| hanfiddle 2006-07-29 ch 1, | A great description about how communication fails because we are unable to speak... |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-07 ch 1, | Nice touch of the flower at the end. |
| Kaity and Jordan 2005-07-07 ch 1, | Wow...excellent piece, great rhyme, keep it up! -Kaity and Jordan (please review back) |