|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Astana 2006-06-10 ch 1, | Wow! Very ruthless and powerful, great poem, keep it up! |
| caz15th 2006-03-15 ch 1, | Wow. That's all I can say. So simple, yet so expressive...BRILLANTLY done. I have no favourite bit, I love it all. Keep it up! |
| Infection 2006-01-03 ch 1, | this was good. liked the first line aswell as the last two. good job. |
| Ajna 2006-01-03 ch 1, | Great poem! I'm really at a loss of words here... But I love how it's like that person stole everything except what kept you living and breathing, and now you feel it's tainted, so you will let it go in their memory... Ah, that didn't come out right, but I hope you get my point. :) It was a lovely read. |
| Fox Angel 2005-09-30 ch 1, | I know how you feel...Oh well they'll proabely pay someday I liked your poem it's on my favorite Storyies list! |
| Aylae 2005-08-24 ch 1, | wow. deep and emotional, origial too, i like "this blood i spill in your name" so many different resonances..wow..nice but sad...x |
| panthergoddess 2005-07-21 ch 1, | i know how you feel. well, i guess all the people that make us feel like that will pay one day. |
| Hidden Lies 2005-07-10 ch 1, | Great poem, very good! |