hehe good start...kind of confusing but still a good start.

wow! update soon! i love it!

i like thrillers, bring on the adventure!ohwaae! im visualising a school paper with murder streaks or blackmail on frontpage. not so cLICHE.

x. well, i must say when i read your...wht was it...the bride hunt i thought oh my gosh this is the coolest, but now...wow! i can't wait 2 c wht will hpn nxt! dont take ur time, wright fast!

lol..poor joan getting busted by the evil twin...:DDoes Drake know about the Hulbrook/East Tamroth rivalry hatred thing?

hm...mary-lou is creepy, and Lucien seems a bit dodgy. Fiona seems like a cool character. :D

hehe...u know the lucien looking guy that she saw on the way back from the lair, was that this guy? The twin? hm...does joan fall 4 this guy? :D I think this guy is a bit less dodgy than lucien. Keep up the writing!

lol...i have 2 say that the 3 years later surprised me

hmm..its very interesting...and the charctaers all have a v. distinctive charcater. Keep writing!

nice story, keeo it up. please update soon, i really want to know what happens between joan and the russian dude