Ooh! Another dark one! Guarded, yet wonderful nonetheless. I loved it!

cool. I was just thinking about the new theory that autoimmune diseases are caused by too much cleanliness and our world of antibiotics. this doesnt quite relate to yours, but I was just reminded.

as far as modern science goes, I know that in my college, one of the best of bio sciences, they do talk a lot about ethics of science and when too far is too far. you do have a valid point in any case.

That was good, but I think you could have written in better. I did like it, only think maybe it could have used more discriptions, and just a little more background on the scientist.

This is a good piece, but it lacks force. The idea could be delivered much more strongly.