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Answers to Our Future
lunar beauty
2005-07-11 . chapter 1
I like the "gypsy told my hand" line and the sensations you describe about how it feels. Getting your hand read is one weird experience and it comes out well in your writing.
Michiko87
2005-07-07 . chapter 1
I don't see many stories like this here, so it was refreshing. I wonder what she'd be interested in...
Voiceless Innocence
2005-07-07 . chapter 1
It has some very good potential, I hope you update soon!
Oh, and can you please review my story? My first one and I really need suggestions on how to make it better. Thanks!
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