Yeah, that was long, but very creative. It kept me reading, so its pretty good.

i like this...well done...amazing the way you expressed so much...i know how you feel...well done, i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

woah, is this real? like, this is really happening? or has happened? now i'm curious...but anyways, we like! these lines:' the sun was shining down on us and everything was bright' for some reason, reminds me so much of tolkien's(sp? god, how can i not know this...) work! i have no clue why(*still not helpful*), but it's awesome!

*jaw drops* Oh wow! This was really, really, really good! I understand perfectly how you feel now, no questions asked. It helps that I know who these people are too *grins*. I have been trying to email you for 2 days now but it won't go through for some reason... I will try again...maybe I'll send it to you hiddenflame one instead..anyway. I really, really liked this. And you are right. You are just gonna have to wait and see *sigh* Loved it! Love you! *muah*

thank you for the reveiw i like this it is very good!