Reviews for Freedom Lies in Bloody Hands

Thementalmeow 2005-08-16 ch 1,	abuseOh I like this one. Nicely worded.
lunar beauty 2005-07-11 ch 1,	abuseOk, MY reply to the above reveiw. The fact that she DOESN'T mention what she's running from makes it MORE easy to relate to because we don't feel our reason is too small or insignificant etc. If she mentions or hints she's been raped or something traumatic and terrible like that i, personally, can't relate as well to it because i've never had those feelings but i HAVE experienced moments where i want to escape but from situations that are a lot less that rape. get my point?Ok- i think it was very good. I like the "stars that scream and fade out".
Lauren Raven 2005-07-07 ch 1,	abuseWhy? The description is lovely, but I'm not getting any real power from this poem. Why do you (or the viewpoint character) want to flee from life so much? Why are these illusions so much better than what you want to leave behind? You don't have to explicitly answer these questions, but if you give the reader some idea of what you're fleeing it might help us relate to it more. Great job, keep writing.