Whoa that was awesome!

I love the idea that toy can only have life if an owner creates it for them.

It's for that very reason that I can never ever get rid of Mr. A(stuffed animal I've had for 17 years) I could not just abandon him like that!

Not bad, not bad. Has a nice vibe to it, though it does seem to be a bit quick towards the end...Oh well, nice work on the mood here.

av

Wow Kei-chan.. Long time no talk huh? Well, i was bored at school and happened across the site again and went to see what was new at your end. Very interesting indeed.. _ In a good way of course... So, i'm curious though, first i was thinking Lotte was a cat... now i'm guessing she is a doll? . confused... lol... But neway, you should get ahold of me sometime! My email is on my page thingy. _

Shi

Aw...that was kind of a sweet little story...a bit off and I suppose a bit corny, but given the subject it can be forgiven. Nice one here.

avel

Y'know, this sort of reminds me of this one movie, um...Being John Malcovich or something like that with the door an' all. Pretty interesting though...confusing albeit, but intriguing nonetheless. "Children are born with an innate gift of the whereabouts to this door. They can remember each night how to get there, and what lies through its portal…" seems to be the key line...makes me think that this door would be to the imagination and locking one's self inside would be somewhat akin to going mad.

Ah well, nice lil ficlet here and apologies for taking so long in getting back to these.

avel follet

I chose this short story because I liked the title best

The story is fun, quick-paced and satisfying. I think I'll be reading a few more when I get the chance. Nice job.

Daystorm Mage

Twisted...very... very... insanely... twisted...

I have a love of the rain and snow and bad weather, so the picture you paint here is one I can't so easily identify with. But in any case, interesting story. Very bizarre. Shows how life can be hard sometimes. And funny I guess...

Oh my... how dark... and funny in a strange way... hmm, ice cream sounds good right now...

I liked it. It was a short story I wasn't too lazy to read!

Keep up the good work!

Nice, Tk, very nice little ficlet here. Has a nice sort of depressed tone through most of it which gives it the myth-y sort of feel going. Only crit I'd have is that unlike the begining and middle the end doesn't seem to be as tuned. Sort of seems like there's some sort of forced lesson...personally I think that that's the only thing that's holding this piece down at the moment, otherwise it has a very nice little fairy tale vibe going.

Nice job,avel

Aw, no! Fox!

Wow, great story, kinda gives off a vibe like a melancholic (is that a word? _ ) fairy tale. Love it! You're really good at short stories.

Pont

Nice little story, but the way it flows...it really feels as though it ought to be much longer then it is. Just doesn't give you the chance to really believe that it's love an' all that. Anyways though, aside from a couple of errors, this was a nice little short. Good job.

avel

Interesting little story, kinda weird to see this sort of thing from you (and I don't mean that in the bad way). Kind of reminds me of the San Fransisco scene from 'The Core', had that kind of thing going on. Dunno if the science behind it (rapid global warming) is too sturdy, but this read pretty well. Nice, pretty close to being horror-esque as well.

avel

Oh. My. Goodness.

I am now officially buying a hybrid car... and riding my bike whenever possible. *:shiver:* And investing in research into global warming. AAH! That's scary!

Must read something about fluffy pink bunnies and happy flying elephants now...

Keep up the good work! (this is the last time I read one of these short stories this late at night though! :P)

Ponteh

O this is starting out really interesting. I only have a few little pointers...

Paragraph 19: 'I live in a small town in the middle of the dessert and in the middle of nowhere Nevada' I think you meant 'desert' instead of 'dessert' _

Paragraph 35: '“You know, everything on that rack is on sale for 30 off the usual price!”' I think the '30' is supposed to have a percentage sign after it, and I thought I'd point it out, even though it's probably some kind of glitch with FP and thusly not your fault :P

Last paragraph: D mn right! :3 Gimme a ghostie over a big-headed football jock any day! (no offense to football players- some of you guys (and gals) are okay! *:is shot:*)

Too bad he's not coming back T_T aw, oh well. Nifty story though! You've got quite a gift with the supernatural/scifi short stories, don't you? _ Keep up the awesome work! (I promise that I WILL get back to Uoy... eventually _; eheheh)

Ponteh

I really liked how all of your stories were soo different and yet pleasantly bizarre. For me, 500F was the best. I was reading your profile and i can't believe someone actually made that comment about u writing well for a black person. LOL I'm black too but I've never heard that one before...