Short and sweet. I like it a lot. It gets both the point and the emotion across.

Wow...powerful poem. I like it.

So... sad really, but at the same time it's not. The simplicity of this poem feels like that of her life and how it's not sad because it's lacking. It's lcking because she chooses for it to be like so.

Nothing else is of importance unless you make it of importance. Ambyr, wonderfully written poem as always, but are you okay?

what? are you talking about a prostitute? well, that's kind of a bit harsh...but then you have your own way of expressing what you feel!you have the talent, keep it up!:>

simple. beautiful. simply beautiful.

the last girl i was seriously involved with, all that there was for her was sex and cigarettes. it's hard to stay in love with a public ashtray. very nice poem.

Nice insight and details.

I liked how you repeat the phrase "sex and cigarettes." It's a really catchy phrase and it really shows the speaker's obsession for the two things.