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scotti 2006-11-08 . chapter 1
Let's see, how do I sum this up... First off, it took me forever to finish reading it because I kept loosing my place between sentences or rather commas as they(the words) are all jumbled together.(now my brain hurts) This brought to mind several thoughts, but instead of trying to explain each one I will just simply list them in some sort of order( not neccessarly in the order in which I felt them)

Here it goes: Wow, strange, bizzare, thought provoking, angst, sorrow, laughter, what-were-you-thinking, spiritual enlightenment(in an off the wall sort of way), pity, hatred, revulsion, simplicity, holy smokes!, awe inspiring, where's the bleeping censor button, enjoyment, brilliant; all in all, not bad for someone who was stoned out of his gourd when he wrote it. Two stories down and more to read. ~Scottie

PS. You might want to seriously think about laying off the weed though. Take it from someone who's been there.
Emerald Whisper 2005-07-09 . chapter 1
It's good.
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