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| Anna 2007-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseFantastic job so far! I'm excited to see what you could think up! |
| KateisLost 2007-06-14 ch 1,  | abuseI think this is a great idea for a story! Wish you would write more! |
| MyNameIsMad 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseSorry I haven't reviewed anything by you before, and after all your reviews on Bastions. I feel bad now. Aw... Anyways, I liked this! I'm not real big into romance and such, but this seems like a good story so far! Jacob's scary! The only thing I could possibly note on was the fact that everything with Jacob seemed to go a bit fast. Maybe take the time out to show us what his facial expressions are, or something like that. Just a suggestion. Don't feel like you have to act on it, or even acknowledge it. Just putting it out there. Again, nice story, and I thank you for reading mine! -Mad |
| KittyCatSomethingorAnother 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's a wonderful idea I would certainly read it if you were to continue |
| Ankas 2006-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease, please pretty please with cherrys on top continue |
| Im just jin 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abusecan you please please please update? I love the start of this story so can you please update it? |
| JinHang 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseplease continue... ^^ |
| unknown 2005-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Please continue this story!! |
| Rachel Knight 2005-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseO! sounds good so far!! keep updating!! |
| Silver Magiccraft 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThis looks like a really promising story, I hope you will continue it. The idea is really good and I think you've done really well so far. I didn't see any mistakes.Sayonara ~~Silv~~ |
| queen-lala 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseit's a good idea. update soon. |
| Mahtyi 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abusePlease continue this! It has me interested! Only the scene with Jabob went by too quickly. |
| Rose Jameson 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseo I like this story! is it going to be romance? if it is how old is Kayla and how old is the guy in the cabin? |
| LusciousLady 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abusei like it i think you should keep going |
| Shyla 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseNice idea. it starting out to sound really good! |