|Reviews for Uninvited Guest|
| Anna 7/26/07 . chapter 1
Fantastic job so far! I'm excited to see what you could think up!
| KateisLost 6/14/07 . chapter 1
I think this is a great idea for a story! Wish you would write more!
| MyNameIsMad 11/15/06 . chapter 1
Sorry I haven't reviewed anything by you before, and after all your reviews on Bastions. I feel bad now. Aw...
Anyways, I liked this! I'm not real big into romance and such, but this seems like a good story so far! Jacob's scary! The only thing I could possibly note on was the fact that everything with Jacob seemed to go a bit fast. Maybe take the time out to show us what his facial expressions are, or something like that. Just a suggestion. Don't feel like you have to act on it, or even acknowledge it. Just putting it out there.
Again, nice story, and I thank you for reading mine!
| KittyCatSomethingorAnother 3/11/06 . chapter 1
It's a wonderful idea I would certainly read it if you were to continue
| Ankas 2/22/06 . chapter 1
Please, please pretty please with cherrys on top continue
| Im just jin 12/24/05 . chapter 1
can you please please please update? I love the start of this story so can you please update it?
| JinHang 11/22/05 . chapter 1
| unknown 11/3/05 . chapter 1
Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Please continue this story!
| Rachel Knight 7/20/05 . chapter 1
O! sounds good so far! keep updating!
| Silver Magiccraft 7/8/05 . chapter 1
This looks like a really promising story, I hope you will continue it. The idea is really good and I think you've done really well so far. I didn't see any
| queen-lala 7/8/05 . chapter 1
it's a good idea. update soon.
| Mahtyi 7/8/05 . chapter 1
Please continue this! It has me interested! Only the scene with Jabob went by too quickly.
| Rose Jameson 7/7/05 . chapter 1
o I like this story! is it going to be romance? if it is how old is Kayla and how old is the guy in the cabin?
| Dreaming Keeps You Sane 7/7/05 . chapter 1
i like it i think you should keep going
| Shyla 7/7/05 . chapter 1
Nice idea. it starting out to sound really good!