Fantastic job so far! I'm excited to see what you could think up!

I think this is a great idea for a story! Wish you would write more!

Sorry I haven't reviewed anything by you before, and after all your reviews on Bastions. I feel bad now. Aw...

Anyways, I liked this! I'm not real big into romance and such, but this seems like a good story so far! Jacob's scary! The only thing I could possibly note on was the fact that everything with Jacob seemed to go a bit fast. Maybe take the time out to show us what his facial expressions are, or something like that. Just a suggestion. Don't feel like you have to act on it, or even acknowledge it. Just putting it out there.

Again, nice story, and I thank you for reading mine!

-Mad

It's a wonderful idea I would certainly read it if you were to continue

Please, please pretty please with cherrys on top continue

can you please please please update? I love the start of this story so can you please update it?

please continue...

Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! Please continue this story!

O! sounds good so far! keep updating!

This looks like a really promising story, I hope you will continue it. The idea is really good and I think you've done really well so far. I didn't see any

Silv

it's a good idea. update soon.

Please continue this! It has me interested! Only the scene with Jabob went by too quickly.

o I like this story! is it going to be romance? if it is how old is Kayla and how old is the guy in the cabin?

i like it i think you should keep going

Nice idea. it starting out to sound really good!