| Reviews for Even in Death |
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Crazy Biene 1/22/06 . chapter 2dang grl, talk bout suspense! U gotta update this! Biene yup, I'm back, lol. |
Kenya 7/31/05 . chapter 1 Very good. Rather suspenseful and action-filled beginning. I'm sure there are other peeps like me that will be angry if you discontinue it. also, good show on the grammatic and spelling skills; you are improving (thanks to my perfectionism? ha ha) greatly (i sound like an old sensei!) the only friendly criticism i can think of is the choppy-sounding use of things like "slowly yet surely" and "tightly yet securely" that kinda break the flow of the sentence. That is all. |
Blue Flamed Phoenix 7/8/05 . chapter 1I like it you should definitly continue! |