Aw, Ryann is so cute. I love Victoria's personality, she seems so nice. Anyways, I think this story would work perfectly as a chapter story OR a one-shot. But, you're the author you decide. _

OH. That was really sweet. Ryann seems like he'd be such a cute little boy, heh. My only suggestion would be to have the ending have more closure... but I sort of liked the ending the way it was. Cheers!

hmph oh no sulking in the review box _ happy remain happy nice story short but not that short hmm thats all i got to say _ thats my toad face!

good thoughts with this one, i liked it. maybe a few more details - on looks, and the 5 senses - could be used, but thats a nitpicky thing. i liked the idea with the flower...very sweet

Mack

sweet, but sad at the same time.

Aw that is cute and a little sad at the same time. Good story!

beautiful story.

i really like the idea of a flower being hope for the little boy.

do continue, and were you in a hospital recently (just wondering)

It's one shot? aww...that's too bad...it was really good! Great job! Don't forget prayers for people in London...*sniffs*