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| Infection 2005-08-18 ch 1,  | abusewow- i loved the poem, espescially the the lines- "Today is the day you finally understandThe chronicles of me" |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI love this. you seemed to have described yourself very nicely. Awesome work ~Sorrow~ |
| blackoutroses 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abuseloved the rhyme:"Today is the day you finally understandThe chronicles of me" its good to have you back and this project is sure to be interesting. great start! |
| SilentStones 2005-07-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, I liked how you made this poem as the beginnings of a story, as though you're giving the reader a chace to understand and associate with you.Good work!Kali |
| scudcrow 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis isn't just lovely, it's fabulous. Before the start of a wildfire, smoke is seen. Would I be mistaken to presume that this is just the tip of the iceberg? A foreshadowing of the steel magnolia, of what is to come? Je l'aime ici, K |
| eternal-reaper-kid 2005-07-15 ch 2, | abusewow, are you depressed? cool tho i like! |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-07-14 ch 2, | abuseMaybe instead of family memebers, your tree could have friends. Your tree would live forever if it was a tree of friends. Very well done and a beautiful way of describing it, even if it was a sad thing. Very well written. Keep it up. PS I do get it! |
| Extraho-Uxor 2005-07-14 ch 2, | abusesad poem... do you mean they're dying? |
| eternal-reaper-kid 2005-07-11 ch 1, | abusewowjamapop! cool poem, sorry for that im on a hormonal/sugar high!(manic laugh) |
| underminingfaith 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abusenice introduction, I'm looking forward to the rest of the poems. You keep the rhythm well - good work. |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseA beautiful beginning. A lovely poem with a nice flow and the promise of more to come. Keep it up. |
| Osunale 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseLovely poem. The rhyming comes naturally and smoothly, and fits the style perfectly. It makes a wonderful beginning to a collection. "Always trying to invisible" I think a word is missing. |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like it, not only is it empowering to the reader but also the writer as well. I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |