This is superbly fantastic. You created quite an effect with your word structure/choice. Very ominous, very formidable. Nice job.

Why didn't Lamia write it herself. She can write poems fine! And why did it take you so long to post it here. I know I've heard at least part of it a LONG time ago. I can't wait until Wednesday! hehehe! I could cost my dad a lot of money again on accident. That was funny and you haven't a clue what I'm talking about, Mars! HEHEHE! I'm hyper, I just got back from swim, but Nora's group didn't get in, we just stretched. In one of the magazines that she had out was missing a coma, I pointed it out to Jo. OK, so back to the actual poem: Loved it, write again soon!

end of the world is a scary subject. I don't generally like rhyming poems but you pulled it off nicely =)