This is good. Simple, rythmatic, easy on the eyes. I can see why it was published. Well done.

And I love America, I just feel bush isnt doing what is best for everyone. But to each there own, right? ; )

I liked this one very much.

Although, rhyming thing with thing?

That would be a no-no.

But I did enjoy this poem a lot.

Good job.

I so agree.

Wow. So true. I love it! Thanks so much for reviewing one of my poems, by the way. I really appreciate it. I know what you mean by begging for reviews. It really depends on your definition of what "begging" is. If you think that the way I asked "REVIEW!" then "please?" is irritating, please let me know. If it is irriating, I will edit it. Its just that I don't really consider that begging. I meant it as more as a "grovel" joke. Get me? Oh well, anyway. Just wanted to let you know that I wasn't seriously begging, lol. And also, I do really like to get reviews, especially constructive ones. How else would I develop my writing.

Excuse the long "essay".

-Vanessa