Might not be your best, but I still reckon it's awesome. The weapon, I imagined it to be somewhat like a chainsaw, but then you said it shot energy... Oh well... cool.Thanks for your review of my chapter, makes me feel like a proper author...

This story grabbed my attention from the start. Awesome. I don't entirely get the bounty hunter thing. Do they work for criminals or (well obviously not the police)? What does the job entail? If you could clear that up it'd be great.

oh man! dude! i LUV the way you put the last lines spaced out on different lines. very freestyle poetic.

Oh, this was a good chapter! I really liked it! And the action's good too! Keep up the good work!

Hey, I liked the chapter! I wanted to know from the start what happened to Lark... :( Poor Lark... and poor Echo! After hearing that story, I really want them to find each other quick! KYAH! And those bounty hunters are after Echo! Yikes! Guess I better read the next chapter, eh? ^_^

This chapter was SO awesome. I love how you described the action. In some places it was a little vague and hard to understand but overall a great chapter.

Oh, this is awesome. I love how you've described the place, its so different to what we're used to but at the same time it's possible to imagine something like this existing. Spooky. I love your characterisation as well.

lol, "but FP's editing system is being a butt." HAHAHA! Yeah, I can sure agree with that! Hey, nice chapter! ^_^ Long chapters ain't bad! ^_^ Oh, man, I hope she sees Edward again and doesn't run into those evil bounty hunters again! That's gonna be REALLY bad! Well, this is coming along very well! I'm likin' this story! ^_^ Please update soon!

Aww. Well, this was a cute chapter. I enjoyed it.^^ You're a really talented writer.

Dang, what a weird world this is! It changed so much in the future, it's not even the same one, it seems! :( Glad it's just a story! ^_^ Course, it might be a lot like that soon... well, anyway, I liked this! I'm glad Echo met one of her other friends again! ^_^ It's good to know that even in that world, there are still good people and friends! ^_^ Can't wait til chappy 3! lol, I got that term from you! ^_~ Nice work!

lol, again with the combined words, but I guess it doesn't matter! ^_^ lol Anyway, this was good, I'm so glad the doctors gave her that power! Now she can escape from pretty much anyone! ^_^ This is startin' to get good, and I can't wait til chapter 3! ^_^

Wow. I was impressed. It was very well written. Yes, I was very impressed. Drawn, this chapter drew me like you wouldn't beleive. I would like to see a update... even though I gave up on my stuff here and on wanting to evev see this place again...! You, I remember your reviews. And they meant a lot. Yours and glitchs, and I humbly want you to know I enjoy your work and will continue to a be a fan of it. Rock on.

Raging Lion

wow... that is really thought provocing. well written too...

hehe, wow there were alot of mistakes... srry...

thanks, Shinco! Glad you like so far! (reccomend me to others!) ~_^

Wow, dang, intense! Oh, I saw a few mistakes in the story like where you accidentally didn't put spaces in between words, and when you said the year two hundred fifty, did you mean the year two thousand, fifty or two thousand, five hundred? I know fictionpress's editing system is annoying, so it could've been that that did it, but I just wanted to point it out because Salt Lake City, Utah certainly didn't exist in two hundred fifty! lol And now, stopping the blabbering on, this story sounds like it's gonna be so COOL! I think I'm gonna love this, I really hope you keep it going cause I really wanna read all of it! I think this story is gonna be one of the best I've ever read! ^_^