|Reviews for Not One To|
| anjil 3/12/06 . chapter 1
Perhaps the word scizo comes to mind ... or the fact that you're just madly in love with your muse. And you liked someone else but did something to piss them off and then you wrote a story about your muse being angry with you. A muse sometimes equals a conscience. Hmm. Imagine that! I'm new to The Press. I'm going to wander around a tad. Adios amigos.
-Anjil and Matthias
| Ally 1/13/06 . chapter 1
wow sounds like a beginning to a really addicting story
| Ally 9/6/05 . chapter 1
Val i am dying to know more keep it coming!
| Zimbabwe 9/2/05 . chapter 1
uh...what the fuck is going on? that makes no sense whatsoever
| octobertears 9/2/05 . chapter 1
I think it's beautiful. Maybe it's easier for me to say this because I know what's going on, but I think you should definitely keep going with this! This could turn out to be...the most AMAZING story. Your story, Val! Please continue with it!
| fluffyfledgling 7/8/05 . chapter 1
This was somewhat emotional, but...rather confusing. The ending sentence where the 'I' person says "I've lived in my mind for too long" helps a bit, but not enough. Try to incorporate a little more exposition.
| CircleStream 7/8/05 . chapter 1
Hmm...sounds interesting so far. There's not a lot to say much, but I bet it'll be a good story. Update soon.