FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| faithful.dream 2008-07-04 ch 20,  | abusei LOVE this story ! ive read it like 5 times or something megan is such a little BEEP, i hate her |
| liz 2008-05-13 ch 20, anon. | abusethis story is like an over dramatic soap opera. |
| xoxo1 2007-07-24 ch 20, | abuseawesome story! i couldnt believe it when i read that him and megan were engaged but at the end, him and carrie got together, yay -claps hands- |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-06-20 ch 20, | abusethis story was amazing and better than well-written. fabulous job :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-06-20 ch 19, | abusemegan's a bigger ** than i thought she was... phyco much? anyways, excellent chapter. :D |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-06-19 ch 14, | abuseyour story is so addicting. if i wasn't dead tired right now, i would continue reading. u're an amazing writer and this is an awesome story. :D |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-06-19 ch 6, | abusewow. i have to say that you're an amazing writer. i almost wanted to cry myself when i was reading! this is a great story. :] |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseoo, suspence! :] |
| girlwhosings 2007-05-24 ch 21, | abusehahhahahahaha i finally finished reading this. lol. nice plot. lol |
| Strangely Natural 2007-04-19 ch 21, | abuseSimply precious, makes your heart ache, I so glad all the loose ends were tied up, YAY for Jake and Carrie! |
| XxSaddenWolvexX 2007-02-04 ch 20, | abuseMan u really know how to write a story lol i jumped alot and was ** alot i cryed and alot of everything in the end u make a killer story i loved it and i just wanted say GREAT STORY! |
| siddika 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story. |
| JusticeWriter 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I really enjoyed it. |
| zkay 2006-12-11 ch 20, | abuseThis is one of the most touching stories I've read. Cliché yes but nevertheless good. I liked your characters Jake, Carrie and Harry. Jake, for the naggy feeling in his heart that drew him to Carrie despite being the dense idiot he is. Carrie, for juggling between both work and Brian. For being the strong woman she is despite the emotional roller coaster she's facing. Harry, for being an overprotective big brother. I wished there were more Brian and Jake bonding scenes though. |
| Alenor 2006-08-17 ch 21, | abuseheya, this was a wonderful story. cya later ~ Alenor. |