Ah. This is "something profound".

Many thoughtful happy shiny wrappings, yet the meaning within the box is the best!

I get this poem, through and through. From the start I had a feel for it, yet I read it twice to see if my theory "fit".

It is also fitting that out of ALL your poems, I tried this one first.And I enjoyed the memorable moral...

Yay, I see you like Phantom of the Opera too! -grins-

About the poem: I thought it was pretty... the whole tone of the poem seemed distant yet faintly sparkling... like this elusive shadow I just can't catch. I can't say I really understood what the poem was all about, but good work all the same :) Keep writing!

reviews are appreciated and i'm showing my appreaction for your rreviews of my work. and this is a good poem.

i love the end- twist on the nursery rythme. this is a beautiful and thoughtful idea and well written.

very sweet and so cute. makes me think of my little sister staring up at the stars. :)

~* noelle

Really cute! I like it a lot.

Nice Poem.

Thanks for Reviewing mine.

Yeah the hearts were a bit much..Lol

oh this is good. love the idea of the wishing star taking care of itself for once instead of the whiny others who should be left to their devices to get what they want. and the rythm of "That yell and whine and prod and poke" is interesting and gives a nice beat to the poem.

aw so sad and sweet... well done.. thanks for your review

hehe.i thought the review thing was part of the poem for a sec.but great rhyming and the poem is quite sweet.

e.ebony.

Very, very sweet. Makes me think of a child looking up at the sky. Really cute beautiful.

Ciao! Thanks for the reviews you gave me. The first thing I noticed was your penname, before I even read the review. I really like the - shoot, I can't find a way to say it - The "idea" of words flowing from a quill as you write.

Now, relative to the your poem, I enjoyed the lyrical feeling of it. It had a sing-song flow to it, like that of a nursery rhyme (I think that's a good thing, by the way). The last verse was also a very fitting end to it. In verse 4, though, I personally did not understand the relation between the two lines.

Keep up the amazing work,

TTM

Beautiful~~ stars are so inspirational to wiches and hope of the future~ Great work!

keep writing!

Sounds a little selfish, but when I read into it I guess it makes sense. Nice job.

I really like this. In some weird way, even though it probably doesn't mean what I interpret it to mean, but I can relate. The way i interpreted it anyway. But I think that's a good think. A reader is supposed to do that. In writing that isn't supposed to be persuasive, I think that any reader should be able to interpret the writing in their own way. That's the point right? Writing something that readers can enjoy and relate to?