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| fergyness 2005-07-17 ch 1,   | i LOVE it, so clear and yet so deep... very beautiful with elegant words... makes you feel good about yourself and not want to waste your life away.. -ferg- |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-08 ch 1, | Quite nice. |
| Slowly Sinking 2005-07-08 ch 1, | Very powerful and inspirational, brilliant work. |
| Luthiena o Lorien 2005-07-08 ch 1, | This is a wonderful and well-written poem, but I do not understand how this is a haiku. Unless it was originally broken up into the traditional 5-7-5 3 line poem? |