'tis a lovely poem. and very true too. sometimes, when you see something/someone beautiful, they're jsut trying to cover up some mistake; they hide behind it.

judt today i also wrote a poem based on a dream i had but i assure it's a happy one.

and believe the pleasure is all mine, you have already added some of my poems to your favourites and i appriciate you for that; it menas a lot to see that others like my poems and can actually relate to them too.

take care and keep writing.

EB

This is beautifull! as to rule breaker...i didn't mean to mess it up THAT badly. thanks for the reviews.

Wow- your dreams are almost as twisted as mine are! I know what you mean by it being not as odd once you write it down... It was a great poem! Poems aren't my specialty, but it seemed good. Well, nothing's my specialty... alright, I'm blabbering! In the third line in the third stanza it was kinda difficult to read- the wording seemed strange. Other than that, great job!

I actually like this. very dark in a sense.