oh thats sad. it sent shivers down my spine. Its great. It really is.

remorsefully touching- and beautiful, nice rhyme meter, and i loved the repeating verse! overall great job

very very sad... but well expressed. If this poem was based on a true story I hope she died peacefully. This poem struck a very emotional chord in my heart... and not many things do that. Great job.

Very moving and beautiful.

makes me tear...it's sad, but true i guess. is it a real story?...nice work, nonetheless! this was a great but saddening poem.

tuesday

Wow. So sad!