This was a good poem. Loved the "lead me in the waltz of life" line. There were no errors, the layout was fine and it brought to mind pictures from my childhood. Really well done. Luv Kaitx

It reminds me of another poem you've done I think: Nubm. That's it. Just because of the imagining/pretence I think that this one starts off with.

wonderful memories of childhood. great poem.

reminds me of being a kid.

but even games can become commercial after a while.

beautiful poem.

i liked freeze tag.