Your poem is blisslike a first kissit flows from your heartone flowing endding, middle and startAnd takes me awayfor a brief second todayTo a place full of happiness...

... and Sun Flowers smile in the rain

nice poem, great work :) thanks for the review

I got it right away. It's a very good poem. I read yut LJ wich tiped me off to the poem so then i came to see if i could desipher what the deal was. anyhow i love it, good job chicka

very, very clever! took me a while, but i finally got it. better late than never, eh? well, it definitely makes a lot more sense now. BIEN!

(hint: to those out there who still haven't grasped it, look at the poem. just look)

Strange. Not much depth to it, is there? It's like a shallow pool reflecting words, but hinting at bottomless pits hidden beneath it's surface...unfortunately, few have the ability to penetrate it that far...I'M certainly not one of those few...

very short, (highly unlike you) but I suppose change is for the better? -ADD