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| The Dark Rose 2005-12-20 ch 1,   | Your poem is blisslike a first kissit flows from your heartone flowing endding, middle and startAnd takes me awayfor a brief second todayTo a place full of happiness... ... and Sun Flowers smile in the rain |
| sunday night sky 2005-11-11 ch 1, | nice poem, great work :) thanks for the review |
| Tiffini 2005-07-20 ch 1, | I got it right away. It's a very good poem. I read yut LJ wich tiped me off to the poem so then i came to see if i could desipher what the deal was. anyhow i love it, good job chicka |
| Euric's Creed 2005-07-19 ch 1, | very, very clever! took me a while, but i finally got it. better late than never, eh? well, it definitely makes a lot more sense now. BIEN! (hint: to those out there who still haven't grasped it, look at the poem. just look) |
| Jani Rieme 2005-07-19 ch 1, | Strange. Not much depth to it, is there? It's like a shallow pool reflecting words, but hinting at bottomless pits hidden beneath it's surface...unfortunately, few have the ability to penetrate it that far...I'M certainly not one of those few... |
| Arcane D. 2005-07-10 ch 1, | very short, (highly unlike you) but I suppose change is for the better? -ADD |