|Reviews for Segregation Sisters|
| MrTentacles 3/28/08 . chapter 1
It was well written, and I enjoyed it somewhat.
But I can't help but see the bias in it. Anti-racism.
I still liked it.
| Lavender Knight 7/9/05 . chapter 1
what can I say...you've tried. Although, the structure and all that kinda stuff is all right. This subject is a little shaky. Im not saying, don't write on it, cuz hey, you're voice, , I'm really disappointed in your characterization. These girls are like what? Nine? Im just saying that they're behaving a little too...well...stupid. Why is everyone doing things because their parents did it? I mean, yeah, both twins are easily succumbing to anything around them. One minute, its thier parents, next its Dana. Maybe, this story would have been stronger if maybe you had reasons why twins joined in with Dana. Peer pressure, was it? No, it just seemed they were blindly following. Were they trying to show up their family. What was could've been good, but its the characters that are making me seeth even more than the subject matter, which is saying tried, thats all Im saying, you tried.