|Reviews for Ice Cream Woes|
| lilallaboutme 8/1/05 . chapter 1
That makes me want some ice cream...
| Calliope Veronica 7/15/05 . chapter 1
I love this! go you!
| fragglerock 7/13/05 . chapter 1
(Laughs) Ha ha! Cool. :)
| miasmas 7/12/05 . chapter 1
The last sentence is really good. I loved the poem. I cansee myself crying over someone taking away my ice cream. I still do because I love ice cream. Which reminds me...I have to eat ice cream...in the morning...because I love ice cream...and it tastes good in the morning...
miasmaswho is currently eating ice cream!
| Arcfall 7/10/05 . chapter 1
x3 Poor little girl. I like how you captured her! She was portrayed well.
'Through perfect hills of white.' I like that line. Good work, keep it up!
| youzi 7/10/05 . chapter 1
haha! nice, you captured the simplicity of a child's view. keep writing D
| S.L. Klassen 7/9/05 . chapter 1
This is ADORABLE. Absolutely loved it. You portrayed the little girl very well. *grins* Kudos.
| Kira Deleria 7/9/05 . chapter 1
Very cute, poor girl. I love the last line. The Oh woe is me stuff works in this poem well. Cool stuff :)