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| Reviews for Ice Cream Woes |
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   lilallaboutme 8/1/05 . chapter 1That makes me want some ice cream... |
| Calliope Veronica 7/15/05 . chapter 1 I love this! go you! |
| fragglerock 7/13/05 . chapter 1 (Laughs) Ha ha! Cool. :) |
| miasmas 7/12/05 . chapter 1 The last sentence is really good. I loved the poem. I cansee myself crying over someone taking away my ice cream. I still do because I love ice cream. Which reminds me...I have to eat ice cream...in the morning...because I love ice cream...and it tastes good in the morning... miasmaswho is currently eating ice cream! |
| Arcfall 7/10/05 . chapter 1 x3 Poor little girl. I like how you captured her! She was portrayed well. 'Through perfect hills of white.' I like that line. Good work, keep it up! |
| youzi 7/10/05 . chapter 1 haha! nice, you captured the simplicity of a child's view. keep writing D |
| S.L. Klassen 7/9/05 . chapter 1 This is ADORABLE. Absolutely loved it. You portrayed the little girl very well. *grins* Kudos. |
| Kira Deleria 7/9/05 . chapter 1 Very cute, poor girl. I love the last line. The Oh woe is me stuff works in this poem well. Cool stuff :) |
