 Soulshifter 2005-07-09 . chapter 1This is a question I pull from many poems... "Do you love me as much as I love you?!?" I think no one will ever know that answer, because it is human nature to mislead. And thus, it is impossible to trust those opinions they give.
you have some powerful imagery here. And I write with parallelism a lot, and I see some good usage here.
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