*sigh* I am tired of slasher poems that are in your face. I've written a couple, but much more discreet and subtle in manner.

I like it. I really like the begining half. It is sad though but the way you word it, almost like a song but not quite.

This was so sad! I can relate again... I just found someone that I care about so much. I know if he leaves I will die... Thank you for putting this feeling into words... I loved it.~Paige

This is nicely written. It's sad, but that's not a bad thing. I like the rhyming couplets, they worked well. The ending stanza was especially powerful, it brought it back to earth. Nice job. Good poem.