i like this although my religious veiws differ, it's similar to my poem "faithless"

Lovely. Inspiring also. I liked it a lot, especially the first few lines, but I also think with your talent, if you wanted, you could make it much more powerful, just a few more original lines. But it's nice like it is, so don't worry. I also enjoyed your bio. Thank you for the review.

Oh that is sad! Well, uh, your right i don't remember you. i should though since you write beautifly! Also, i have been out of twon for four weeks and rarely had a chance to go near a computer and publish. i was babbysitting my cuzs . thinking of changing my name to 'the nanny from hell' anyway...WRITE ON! (

Not quite for sure what to do with this one...lol...i think when u took the filler...u took the rest of the poem...but it stands just fine on it's own...

That's really good! I know what you mean...

yet again...sad, but the emotions break through this so well!

The poem is initially a little unsteady, but it all comes together as a very nice piece. The last five lines are very strong a delightfully angsty way.

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WOW you put so much emotion into this...wonderful...

Always, saeo

Wow. Just wow. *is staring at poem in amazement*

This is so sad! But so well written! I like it; keep writing!

Anna